Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Of all the people..

Of all the people I ever met
you are the one I shall never forget

From morning till sunset
Those days were my best

The first shower that got us wet
Made me forget all the rest

Sweet nothings which once said
Are etched in my heart as yet

One small fight and I was upset
Now its late even to regret

This might be the end of all I felt
But forever will I cherish the moments spent

Of all the people I ever met
you are the one I shall never forget

6 comments:

Sandeep said...

hmmm... Intense gal :)

ankit said...

Simple yet scintillating !!!

:)

Neha Dua said...

Thanks Sandy and Ankit :)

Nandan said...

Nice, its true for all of us...write something of friendship.

Hriday said...
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Hriday said...

you really need to experiment with metre! couplets r a rare form in english and tend to make your poems childish...and rhyme is not essential...in your attempt at rhyming you have made it simplistic